Position Through Contextualising / Written Response & Feedback note


Feedback Note

> What is working?

. The bringing the surface of the screen by the idea of turning on and off the screen makes sense.

. It’s interesting that the scratches on the transparent film also implicate my gesture of rubbing


> What is not working?

. When the scratches on the film are scanned, it is barely impossible to read as a representative of the surface. It doesn’t like showing the surface of ‘wood’ or ‘grass’.

. It could be seen more as a proxy of my gesture.


> To develop this further / in future projects:

. Try to fully embody the function I intended at first, to make the screen turns black by the gesture of rubbing(dragging on the mobile screen)

. The mobile touch screen manipulates something(in the screen) by touching and rubbing gestures, which is a very different feature compared to previous surfaces. Can we consider this characteristic of mobile surface in the further process as a enquiry of contemporary surface?

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